Under the broken canopy.

She stood under the canopy

With water in her eyes,

The wornout shelter, still today

Seems so beautiful and nice!

The storm was over

The protection stood no chance!

The old abandoned canopy

Was so loved once.

There she stood all alone

Waiting for the rain to cease

Her God has betrayed her,

Breaking his only promise!

The promise he did

To keep her loved ones safe

But with all of their memories

The broken canopy seemed so safe!

With no walls, and a leaking roof,

Stood the old canopy-

In ruins that she could not repair

But in her heart it will remain beautifully.

Published by Surasree

when life is difficult, take the help of imagination!

19 thoughts on “Under the broken canopy.

  1. I like how something to the human eye is neutralled out by time and wear can still be something so beautiful in someones eyes….like us humans agingπŸ’•πŸ’• nice job πŸ‘πŸ‘

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      1. I’ll be available and functioning from 5th march again…till then I’ll be inactive… Its just today…glad that you are happy and waiting for me!!

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